cold nites and pate(
cat eyes)
uses the man
callus works
lap-dog silly
pinched by: blue blue blue
water(L) bucket in
a sharp a the/
melody whistle
contumelious) youth
culture whole;
palliative please!
be good woodn
o thing there
so your own make
as celestial
(buildings
walk
Friday, May 30, 2008
Tuesday, May 27, 2008
colorado
dail
ysuns
hin
e
come for summer gone
hungry ate across
little harelake
fo
ot
above
fresh snow floated
it was a get then
so then
it was
a then
colorado
rolled
the gentl
y
earth
waited and the prairie
stood sky while still
bound antelope!
circl
e
whi
t e
streaming none fly thousand
ysuns
hin
e
come for summer gone
hungry ate across
little harelake
fo
ot
above
fresh snow floated
it was a get then
so then
it was
a then
colorado
rolled
the gentl
y
earth
waited and the prairie
stood sky while still
bound antelope!
circl
e
whi
t e
streaming none fly thousand
even old woman
neighborhood wood
plays well old man
how many sky
blue like that blue
run bridge dance!
upside down
at my mind
pulchritude
cbs a ring
love imagine
maggie in
falling rodriguez
cuban women
sabado unwiggle
underside boat
a beer
branded calf after
cowboy rope the down
hot branding iron
holds the calf
wiggle squirm
wealthy owner
or two man
p
ipef
or sure
even old woman
priest
i
mage
go
ing to do
look
re veal
later
-gishi bian
28 april 2008
plays well old man
how many sky
blue like that blue
run bridge dance!
upside down
at my mind
pulchritude
cbs a ring
love imagine
maggie in
falling rodriguez
cuban women
sabado unwiggle
underside boat
a beer
branded calf after
cowboy rope the down
hot branding iron
holds the calf
wiggle squirm
wealthy owner
or two man
p
ipef
or sure
even old woman
priest
i
mage
go
ing to do
look
re veal
later
-gishi bian
28 april 2008
Monday, May 26, 2008
Re: the below "bury yourself"
this is a good example of
atomic poetry
my younger son
robert payne
sent me an email of 4 poems (molecules)
i took some key words and phrases
and made one molecule
of the the key words and phrases (atoms)
hence the dual attribution
atomic poetry
my younger son
robert payne
sent me an email of 4 poems (molecules)
i took some key words and phrases
and made one molecule
of the the key words and phrases (atoms)
hence the dual attribution
bury youself
dropdip
dashflutter
fawn
spash
no
pillow cave
hugs
murked voice
kiss
tan legs
clean mirror
slinking voice
thick thick sweater
-gishi bian
-robert payne
dashflutter
fawn
spash
no
pillow cave
hugs
murked voice
kiss
tan legs
clean mirror
slinking voice
thick thick sweater
-gishi bian
-robert payne
no title
the awkish pear fell wildly
by the dog's face
and the dog (like the sun)
turned yellow
and barked
and the people at the bar
kept drinking
and i walked to my apartment
to watch television
do laundry
write poems
watch the yellow dog
bark at the noonday sun
jesus
things are weird
like a bright pinwheel
and orange cotton candy
and guess my weight
and bob barker
and the tender little roses
and sea-green fallen fruit
and all the sallow people
smoking rolled tobacco or pipes
drooling
as they wait for the morning ride
by the dog's face
and the dog (like the sun)
turned yellow
and barked
and the people at the bar
kept drinking
and i walked to my apartment
to watch television
do laundry
write poems
watch the yellow dog
bark at the noonday sun
jesus
things are weird
like a bright pinwheel
and orange cotton candy
and guess my weight
and bob barker
and the tender little roses
and sea-green fallen fruit
and all the sallow people
smoking rolled tobacco or pipes
drooling
as they wait for the morning ride
translation blue
cloth may ping flew away
december ever cold and horses
telephone center green on bottom
leaves damp some entrada
father's tarnished brass
bookcase supple marriage who
crafting table moved so far
coaster fourbears webster flipped
translation blue essence knew
december ever cold and horses
telephone center green on bottom
leaves damp some entrada
father's tarnished brass
bookcase supple marriage who
crafting table moved so far
coaster fourbears webster flipped
translation blue essence knew
Re: the below poem "poet's death"
this is another example
of atomic poetry
in this example
i use my older son,
woodward hazard's
greek paper
(graduate school
classics effort).
the molecule is his short paper
about of sympotic poets.
i extracted the words (atoms)
that particularly seemed interesting
and re-combined or re-arranged them
to form a new molecule
in the form of a poem
i added an ending
and there we have it
jointly attributed.
of atomic poetry
in this example
i use my older son,
woodward hazard's
greek paper
(graduate school
classics effort).
the molecule is his short paper
about of sympotic poets.
i extracted the words (atoms)
that particularly seemed interesting
and re-combined or re-arranged them
to form a new molecule
in the form of a poem
i added an ending
and there we have it
jointly attributed.
poets death
thrust this primary grief
strength w
ill pass
hair pulling
wailing
crying
womanly grief
choked by thundering sea waves
perished men of the lung
submerged downwards washed swol
len dash surge-
-poets death
shipwreck
warrior drinker singer
grief elements connected
funeral rights rolling
hades carries meaning
a
ll come
to a (point) anticipating endurance
chiding of friends
then abundance of fes
tivities cheer
delights self one (down whale flipped)
bruise blow wound
crushing loss battle
powerful true crescendo blind
is a wound is indeed a flavoring
all made a cheer
the show was very much
over
ten bucks at the door
- gishi bian
- woodward hazard
17 may 2008
strength w
ill pass
hair pulling
wailing
crying
womanly grief
choked by thundering sea waves
perished men of the lung
submerged downwards washed swol
len dash surge-
-poets death
shipwreck
warrior drinker singer
grief elements connected
funeral rights rolling
hades carries meaning
a
ll come
to a (point) anticipating endurance
chiding of friends
then abundance of fes
tivities cheer
delights self one (down whale flipped)
bruise blow wound
crushing loss battle
powerful true crescendo blind
is a wound is indeed a flavoring
all made a cheer
the show was very much
over
ten bucks at the door
- gishi bian
- woodward hazard
17 may 2008
Saturday, May 24, 2008
birth twice aisle
camping recreational standard vehicle
harvest exotic fruit red yellows
cop stomach flashing critical
snow cold leaves laugh
dark toucans collide
tepid tulip down
covered frown windows
leaves briskness flowers winter
sweaters wool socks ispissated
shoes hats boots approaches
green nice by engine flew
side-walking along
high balloons moons
danced while chi hoi polloi
unknown spears walked
suspended nobody 1952
dress long coif snug nylons smile
accretionary engaging grind
birth twice aisle
errant ship dazed mantel
piece someone full of brio
down airplanes vienna lennigrad
pallid eyes the woman bed
pillow discovery phonation breasts
running faster pantaloons wild beasts
claw wizard relief escape
salve walk poultice battle
the raffish sun other places
slubbing city the no family same
-gishi bian
harvest exotic fruit red yellows
cop stomach flashing critical
snow cold leaves laugh
dark toucans collide
tepid tulip down
covered frown windows
leaves briskness flowers winter
sweaters wool socks ispissated
shoes hats boots approaches
green nice by engine flew
side-walking along
high balloons moons
danced while chi hoi polloi
unknown spears walked
suspended nobody 1952
dress long coif snug nylons smile
accretionary engaging grind
birth twice aisle
errant ship dazed mantel
piece someone full of brio
down airplanes vienna lennigrad
pallid eyes the woman bed
pillow discovery phonation breasts
running faster pantaloons wild beasts
claw wizard relief escape
salve walk poultice battle
the raffish sun other places
slubbing city the no family same
-gishi bian
wholly satisfied
second energize sharp
coffee again gear
smile string cloud
a
fecund young woman
pleasant
mozart soft futonly there
c-span tv who skin
neopxo;
memenop
rotooz, apolt/ozw.
water true
branch could be
the cover and
water beneath for
frozen in a perfect plane
wholly satisfied
air cut sheaths of feeling
brow across demanded pause
nares slipping glaring
such a lake ice
and&
sat
then
car
ol's air
-gishi bian
coffee again gear
smile string cloud
a
fecund young woman
pleasant
mozart soft futonly there
c-span tv who skin
neopxo;
memenop
rotooz, apolt/ozw.
water true
branch could be
the cover and
water beneath for
frozen in a perfect plane
wholly satisfied
air cut sheaths of feeling
brow across demanded pause
nares slipping glaring
such a lake ice
and&
sat
then
car
ol's air
-gishi bian
gishi and his son
why two poets?
"nothing was there,"
was written by gishi bian
using a creative writing paper
written by his son robert payne
hence the dual attribution
it is an example of atomic poetry
taking the basic skeleton of his paper
gishi bian pulls key words and ideas
and re-arranges them and re-combines them
in new and interesting ways
adding and subtracting words and ideas
in a stream of consciousness manner
the body of the poem is 90% representative
of the original paper
the ending was added
but the poem resembles the paper (the molecule) very little
although most of the words (or atoms)
were taken from the paper
"nothing was there,"
was written by gishi bian
using a creative writing paper
written by his son robert payne
hence the dual attribution
it is an example of atomic poetry
taking the basic skeleton of his paper
gishi bian pulls key words and ideas
and re-arranges them and re-combines them
in new and interesting ways
adding and subtracting words and ideas
in a stream of consciousness manner
the body of the poem is 90% representative
of the original paper
the ending was added
but the poem resembles the paper (the molecule) very little
although most of the words (or atoms)
were taken from the paper
nothing was there
brown tie his loosen
polished ammonia
gibberish terrif
ying
spitting
alleys catching up to me
bitch like a stung hollered bolted
ac
ross honk
ed cars
screeched skin
flesh tearing
my self over crotch
tree trunks
watermelons pointe
d
nose smiling wrapped a
nkle
behind a wall hidden torture toys
on the ground bl
ood i
breathed cold air
initial surge died hobbled
halls my waist no
thing
there
clean wrists
fogged memory
of me take care
swung head i my on
th
e floor
keep movingflatonmyback
i couldn't hear anyone
my feet at saw him
it ended
and i was a gorilla
playing three decker c
hess
head floating down in cement
winning money
it
-gishi bian
-robert payne
polished ammonia
gibberish terrif
ying
spitting
alleys catching up to me
bitch like a stung hollered bolted
ac
ross honk
ed cars
screeched skin
flesh tearing
my self over crotch
tree trunks
watermelons pointe
d
nose smiling wrapped a
nkle
behind a wall hidden torture toys
on the ground bl
ood i
breathed cold air
initial surge died hobbled
halls my waist no
thing
there
clean wrists
fogged memory
of me take care
swung head i my on
th
e floor
keep movingflatonmyback
i couldn't hear anyone
my feet at saw him
it ended
and i was a gorilla
playing three decker c
hess
head floating down in cement
winning money
it
-gishi bian
-robert payne
no title
track
pine juice
unruly
hazards are always
a fact
imagination
download
monkey
can monkey b
e
aloneness
- gishi bian
21 may 2008
pine juice
unruly
hazards are always
a fact
imagination
download
monkey
can monkey b
e
aloneness
- gishi bian
21 may 2008
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